One moment you miss me
The next you don't want me around
One moment your smiling
The next you bear a big frown
I'm still being patient
Because I love you so
And I want you back in my arms
So I'll take the beatings row by row
It's hard to deal with sometimes
Like you're two a-different person
Your heart is one, your mind the other
One makes us happy, the other makes us worsen
Sometimes your soft and sweet
And others your hard and stiff
Laying down rules for us
But all we wish is to shut up and kiss
Author notes
A simple sonnet...not the greatest in the least...little twist in the end. Some of the lines are forced I can tell...and some flow more easily, either way it came from the heart. Another mind vs. heart concept...
Hope you enjoy...feedback welcome...
Comments
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very painful and heartfelt. great write about a two-faced girl
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wow!
i like this so much, this came straight from your heart, and thats what made this complete! It was incredible and your emotions were so raw! a pretty painful write, but your last line made me smile coz it sounded cute! >.< write on buddy!
awesome write once again!
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Yuppp. I know exactly how this feels. Wow.
"One moment you miss me
The next you don't want me around"
Pretty muchhh hammered that feeling VERY well. Incredible. Loved this piece. Full of so much truth & emotion. Keep penninggg
♥
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