Love you
was said to me the other day
Shocked me a great deal
I almost fell off my bed
Instead I layed an cried in tears
Oh, my heart melted so deep
like ice in a glass of ice tea.
today I say those words
you said to me I was shock
You then say to me,
I know I meant it.
I say I know..
The Words
Something I will hold dear to me
Like a brand new teddy bear
I couldnt believe what I was hearing
My mouth droped
My heart stopped
Have been said
The beat in my heart keeps beating
Like a drum in a band
My Soul has been captured by the sun
The Words Have been said..so
I keep them Locked within...
Author notes
Jus say I was speechless to hear those words..
He said to me..
Comments
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Beautiful.
"Something I will hold dear to me
Like a brand new teddy bear."
I love your words- dang girl! You make me so PROUD!!! You have found the magic of metaphors and your poetry is ALIVE!!! The title is perfect, and your emotions just bleed through. Wow. So VIVID!
-Daddy James.
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it was such a sweet poem really showed your emotions and the person who said them they are very special words but are said too much, and yet not enough great job i love the teddy bear part :]
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hey sis
thanks for the applauds an comment greatly appreciated. Yea I agree, But time will really tell if he truly loves me or not.. ya know.. I aint stressing it cause those was his words. thanks again sis
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