without wings
I am just human
without you
I forget how to
fly
I love
In a list
A contest entry
- - Speak to Me in 15 Words XXVII - by Desire.
700 points, ended July 8, 15 entries
Honorable winner
• next poem in this contest, remove from contest
What did you think
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Thank You!!
Thank You for Your entry: Rescued
This piece tugged hard at Spirit and while I was reading which I did several times~ I kept being shown a reference to a two way mirror- also being shown a tape recorder- and a reference to a diary
whether metaphor or symbolism I'm being shown a tattoo- and hearing word: flower- rose- also reference to thorns- as if an underlining meaning
Strange as it may sound I'm being shown a path with bread crumbs- but reference to Bimbo Bread- (name of company)
Hopefully that makes some sense
**Please credit Photobucket in the AC- Thankies so much
Magnificent take on the prompt~
Powerful message & images You have brought forth
These words grabbed and pulled~
without wings I am just human...
Unique Voice spoken~
Thank You for sharing Your Heart also Spirit!
Best wishes to You in the contest Sweet Soul
**Judging will be done shortly...
Many blessings too
and much love & light~ Desire~*~
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Oh how profound a statement you've made in a mere fifteen words. For without love, are we not all less human? All the best to you in the contest.
Sincerely,
Leo Long
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Beautifully written...
although it is difficult to say it all in only 15 words, you have quite a knack for fitting it all in. All the emotion and imagery, as well as the ability to make a connection with your loyal readers. 
Best of luck in this contest, you've written another winner!!! Peace & love, Cyn
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Yes.
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Sigh... C
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Excellent!!!!
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