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Chickadee

tiny chickadee
hidden in the tall pine tree
singing a song

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  • IanG silver member
    July 31
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    Beautiful

    What a pleasant scene to suddenly have burst into view. Thanks for sharing this pleasure.


  • NurseyPoo
    July 29
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    I like this. It has a nice feel. Pen on...


  • jadedsnapdragon gold member
    July 13
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    Nice haiku!


  • maggiejamespoet silver member
    July 10
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    This is beautiful, Candy, and is surely a good way to start a cheerful morning!


  • Sandygram silver member
    July 10

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    Lovely Poem

    You have penned a lovely poem. Reminds me of springtime. Thanks for sharing with us here. A pleasure to read. You take care.

    Bless You,
    Sandy


  • Kelli Marie
    July 5

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    Ah, this is so sweet and very well crafted. I think you did an excellent job with this haiku. I like it.
    Kellil
  • carole21
    July 5

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    nice

    nice nature write . . liked "tiny chickadee" and "hidden in the tall pine tree" . . keep up the good work !!


  • sunshinegirl
    July 5

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    If this is a haiku, you need to add one more syllable to each line... It is supposed to be 5-7-5

    I love it! You did a great job on this one!!

    and love

    Auntie Nyetta


    • Candy6
      July 5
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      Thanks Nyetta. I prefer doing the modern haiku (less syllables) not the tradional haiku, 5,7,5.
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