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Our Choice

 eace to the land and bring our boys home, 

E   nter the new world a love so shown.

A   ll of our children young and the old ,

C   alls out in pain for the pain so shown.

nter together as one with prayers held high,

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O ur Lord waits with tears in his eyes.

N ow we all have a choice what shall it be,

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very one today so feels the need.

A  child can tell you for the adults are so lost,

epeatedly their greed comes with a cost .

here has always been love so what have you chose today,

H aven't you done enough feeding greed in such a way.

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N ow my children stop and take your brothers hand,

O pen your hearts and for love take a stand.

W ork as one and have freedom across the land,

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Author notes

Lay your hate down and as you are bent down look around and the children there beneath you and know its true their life depends on you so as an adult why do we do the things we do .

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  • Wow! This is amazing and so full of truth. Best of luck in the contest. Much love always.


  • maralisa silver member
    July 6

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    beautiful true words in your poem
    N ow my children stop and take your brothers hand,
    O pen your hearts and for love take a stand.
    W ork as one and have freedom across the land,good luck in the contest


  • Midoriko
    July 5
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    this is very good. I love how you wrote it. Keep up your amazing work!!!

    CrimsonViper
  • You may want to consider breaking this up into words.
    It took me a bit to understood what you were trying to say on the side.
    I kept seeing Peace One Arth Now.

    Your rhyme scheme seems off to me- but that could be just that.. me.. Since I'm not used to rhyming myself.

    Other than that, beautiful poem and so true.

    -Les