ceramic, glossy,
the miniature bird is silent
his wings frozen in flight
his beak poised delicately in song
dust hovers in the sunlight
before his glassy eyes
he dances motionlessly
A contest entry
- 30 Words by Dalaney.
600 points, ended July 6, 2008, 19 entries
• next poem in this contest, remove from contest - Anything Goes....Or Does It? by lowercase prelude.
1500 points, ended July 8, 2008, 62 entries
• next poem in this contest, remove from contest - CONTEST: Looking for poems, That will make me say: OMG! This is awesome! 810 points by echo-ink.
600 points, ended July 15, 2008, 58 entries
• next poem in this contest, remove from contest
What be your thoughts?
Comments
-
Very nice poem
about a glass bird.Thank you for entering and good luck in the contest. D. -
Wonderful imagery. Such a vivid way to capture the very bird itself.
-
a lovely entry. thank you so much for your time and your talent. love, lane
Adding your comment:
