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Im not sure what I want to call it yet. So for now just read :)

Please come meet me in my dreams.
I need to see my angels face.
Just to know you're safe and home.
To know you're in a better place.

Please find time to say hello.
Without you here, I miss you so.
The days are short, the nights are long.
I need to hear your voice's song.

If you could visit me today,
I'd tell you all I need to say.
Just one more kiss and one more hug,
So I could send you on your way.

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  • kirbysman Moderators member
    July 5
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    Is this really the same little girl that used to tell me, "I've lost my talent?" And I used to tell you that you hadn't. This is great, ma'am. So neat and precise and well worded and rhymed and full of emotion. Super job - you need to write more of course.

    Paul