With you I feel quite content,
And I had hopes of being with you
to the very end.
But with the world I share with
you,
I'd hate to see you go it though.
I know the love we share
is oh so strong,
But I promise life will be better
for you when I'm gone.
The pain and troubles I've
put you though,
Will all end after what I'm going
to do.
Its hard for me don't you know,
But its all for the best
my heart thinks so.
Moving on you must do,
Don't pity us,I'm begging you.
Move on to keep your sanity,
You've missed alot because of me.
Live life and...
"My dearest friend you'll soon begin
to love again."
A contest entry
- so long to this cold, cold part of the world by houseandcloud.
380 points, ended July 9, 2008, 7 entries
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thanks i really appreciate it
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great poem, keep up the good work
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Moving on you must do,
Don't pity us,I'm begging you.
I feel like that first line there was particularly awkward. It's just phrased very strangely. I'm aware that it's for the purpose of rhyme, but it's really bothersome in the poem. Thanks for entering.
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