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2nd Chance (featuring. Lady J)

Girl... I can change your mind,
just give me one more try.
Just a night to make it better
give me your hand,
and ill take you to a land,
where the sun shines on you 4 ever.
Baby I can make it right,
just let us share this one night
Trust me, I'll treat you with the utmost care...
reveal to you feelings and emotions you only dreamed where there.
You see, your presence is like a glimpse of a day in heaven to me.
When you speak, your voice is in tune with the little birdies
...and my heart beats to your melody.
You shower me with your beauty
...believe me I speak truely
those heavenly brown eyes, make me feel like I'm N a daze.
They're more precious than the twinkles in the skies
And yes I am ashamed for treating you this way
But your forgiveness is what I crave...
Just Let me hold you tight.
I sincerely wish you'd just let us share one night
Let me make this right.
With this...
second chance.

....For with this second chance I promise,
and I dont make promises all a time,
that after this night I will take you home with a face full of smiles
as if I was yours and you were most certainly mine.
And as the stars sparkle, soaring across the sky
I dream it Ends with a hopeful kiss to set off another 4th of July.
With this 2nd chance, girl I...
Will make it up 2 you
and hopefully you
will not withdraw
But have faith in my promise
Have trust in me
It might be much, but take a chance
But let me be your reality dream
I kno you've wondered what the day I offered would endure
Just put your hand in mine
Speak the words that repeat in my mind

"second chance, second chance, second chance...."

Or just nod your head...
Yes or no, I know how you feel
Believe I'll understand....

Author notes

I stood my friend up for a date one saturday. And I'm hopin to get that second chance, so wish me well. I tink she likes me, I don't know, but we'll see.

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Comments


  • SOLS.Moonlight
    July 11, 2008
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    Well I hope it went well or goes well. This is a good poem. I love the flow. Great write.


  • hotchocolate gold member
    July 5, 2008
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    This is great I like this!!