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Rose are red
Violets are blue,
My mom is great,
And I miss you.

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  • x-Black-Butterfly-x silver member
    July 7
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    Welcome to All Poetry

    this is such a beautiful and sweet write for your mum. I love the way you used the cliche roses are red and violets are blue bit as this helped to create a more rhymetic flow to it. It holds a deep emotion within it and even though it is short and simple it is grasping and beautiful with sentiment as well. well done and welcome to the site

    Charlotte
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  • PhantomsAngel87 Greeters member
    July 5
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    Welcome to AllPoetry

    Very sweet poem for your Mum.

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    Enjoy AllPoetry
    Stay safe
    ~Manda
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