Freedom across the land
Independence for people
Reserving our rights
Everyday of the year
Wars continue to cause fear
Our soldiers are lost
Red, white and blue
Keeping the other countries at bay
Striving to be better everyday
Author notes
acrostic (fireworks)
A contest entry
- Acrostic Poetry by misticmoonlite.
775 points, ended July 13, 2008, 7 entries
• next poem in this contest, remove from contest - Anything Goes....Or Does It? by lowercase prelude.
1500 points, ended July 8, 2008, 62 entries
• next poem in this contest, remove from contest
Comments
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this was a good acrostic
it shows your patriotic side -
Good luck in the contest my friend, I enjoyed reading this poem because even though it was an acrostic it wasn't an obvious one.
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forgot! All the best for the contest
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a very good write. the work of soldiers is unimaginible.
is it 'Keeping the other counties at bay?'
or
Keeping the other countries at bay?
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thank you for that spelling issue, i didnt catch it and you know how spell check is ~Amy
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to me..this is a great =Acrostic, i like the words you used to show support in this world, thank you for this entry
good luck
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Great i liked this alot. Its very well written and a great acrostic {did i spell the right who knows} I think you did a great job on this poem. :]]
Love,
Shelly
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