today i felt like cutting
though i cannot tell you why
somedays i hurt so very bad
i just wish to cry
today i felt like dying
though why i cannot say
i cannot explain to anyone
why i feel this way
today i felt like sleeping
and i didn't wish to wake
somedays are worse than others
somedays are just too fake
today i felt like popping pills
just to get a high
i don't know why i want this
somedays i want to fly
today i felt like curling up
and watching the world pass me by
i just want to feel the warm
i don't want to see you cry
today i felt like cutting
though i could not tell you why
somedays are worse than others
someday i wanna cry
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written: June 6, 2008
12:20 pm
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I can relate. Really good
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Seems like you're new to poetry .. or atleast so I thought. Thing is .. it reminded me a lot of myself. Try properly capitalizing and puntuating your writes. And slowly, you'll get better.
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this is a great right.
and i can relate.
i love it.
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thank you very very much
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argh. i know tis one. though i cant even sleep if i try :s.
great write hunni.
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thank you, sweetie
wait, why can't u sleepies?
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i really liked it. it flowed very nicely, i think is your best yet.
but - what u cant tel...thats about me isnt it -
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i don't think it's my BEST....but i like it, too
no, it's not...i promise..... -
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uh huh
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what, u no believe me?
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i did, i just didnt no what else to say. who is it about anyway?
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it's just about me....
and the line "i don't wanna see you cry" that's to Angie, my mom..... -
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oh hm.....
interesting....
i wasnt expecting an answer like that -
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an answer like what?
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i think it just surprised me to hear it was about you and ur mom
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yeah.....
i love you!
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aww wow this is really great. i love it. i can really relate. sometimes i just wanna do the same. jsut wanna die and cut and pop sum pilss just to get away from it all
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thank you
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life really isnt that bad you know gosh -.-
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sometimes it is, though...or at least it seems that way....
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