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Today

today i felt like cutting
though i cannot tell you why
somedays i hurt so very bad
i just wish to cry

today i felt like dying
though why i cannot say
i cannot explain to anyone
why i feel this way

today i felt like sleeping
and i didn't wish to wake
somedays are worse than others
somedays are just too fake

today i felt like popping pills
just to get a high
i don't know why i want this
somedays i want to fly

today i felt like curling up
and watching the world pass me by
i just want to feel the warm
i don't want to see you cry

today i felt like cutting
though i could not tell you why
somedays are worse than others
someday i wanna cry

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written: June 6, 2008
12:20 pm

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  • pancake
    July 17
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    I can relate. Really good


  • Never Fall in Love gold member
    July 13

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    Seems like you're new to poetry .. or atleast so I thought. Thing is .. it reminded me a lot of myself. Try properly capitalizing and puntuating your writes. And slowly, you'll get better.


  • destroy me.
    July 7
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    this is a great right.
    and i can relate.
    i love it.


  • BreathAlilLess
    July 6
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    argh. i know tis one. though i cant even sleep if i try :s.

    great write hunni.

  • XxCrazyBabexX
    July 6

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    i really liked it. it flowed very nicely, i think is your best yet.


    but - what u cant tel...thats about me isnt it

  • XxX-Ivy-Love-XxX silver member
    July 5

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    aww wow this is really great. i love it. i can really relate. sometimes i just wanna do the same. jsut wanna die and cut and pop sum pilss just to get away from it all
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