The rawness of it
The smoke
The taste
I think I値l keep it.
The ash covers the key board
But I type just the same
Then they burn my figures
But I値l finish it up
I think I値l keep it
The addiction kills
But I already feel dead
You can start a fire friend
But I値l be careful with you and your family
I think I値l keep it
I値l time you at perfectly
To quick, I get dizzy
To slow you go out
I値l play on you correctly
Your body in my mouth
I think I値l keep it
Nineteen gone and only one left
You値l keep me till I take more
You値l save me till I want more
The only lie I値l tell involves you
But just the same
I think I値l keep it.
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wow this was a wonderfl write written with raw honesty and I love the way you have used repitition within it to express and emphasise a point. it is is an amazing write and it does speak with such power and I think it can relate to a lot of things in life. at first it made me think of love but then by the edn ym mind had changed with various things. well done with this piece
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thank you very much!
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This is a little hard to read against the background.
This is well penned, I liked the simple raw honesty you express to prove a point of sorts.
Please put this under catergory 'Drugs' or 'Adult' so younger poets do not come across this
Thank you
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