Time stops but the candle keeps burning
It's flame kissing your eyelids
Your crotch
A warm hand reaches through your mouth
Drawing down into your chest
Wrapping it's fingers around your heart
It forms a fist
And everything tastes sweet
Heart stops
Throat gasps
Lungs constrict
Thighs shake
Fingers grasp
And as soon as it began
It's over
Tell me honestly what you think, please.
Comments
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Your poem was lovely but I have to close this contest due to lack of entries. I am sorry.
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Thank you for entering this.. very exciting.
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I like this is good!
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