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Honk if You're Lonely Tonight

It's all too familiar
this defeat that chills
when the moon pierces clouds
and sunlight hides in hills

Three in the morning
and the room is spinning fast
hallucinations wait in shadows
horrible images they cast

Everything you say ruins this
the idea of things working right
when the pieces fall in place
and demons are defeated outright

It shouldn't hurt to fall in love
Sunshine shouldn't make you cry
comfort shouldn't come in sleep
the best weed won't get you high

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  • emLeejo
    July 5, 2008

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    amazing. you put your feelings into your poems very well. n u got that rhyming thing down. sorry that stuff happens.