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My path, Your path, His path, Her path.

Poeple have there diferant ways.
We all have somehting to say.
I don't care what path you walk.
As long as we can both talk.

We both agree we would like to stay,
Even if just for a day.
Lets be freinds brother,
Lets hold on to each other.

We both want to send evil away.
We don't waant the baddness to stay.
We can do it if were freinds,
Trust each other to the end.


Author notes

Tolerance and understanding.

This dosn't say anything about reliog diretly, it has many meanings, I just wrote this off the top of my head.

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  • Amythest Moonjade gold member
    July 15

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    Merry meet,

    Congratulations on winning the Gold. There were a lot of good entries in the contest. I love how you don't really specify an exact religion, but the precepts that almost all of them believe in. I must also agree with Luckin theshadows about how incredible this is for just "off the top of your head."

    A suggestion, if you don't mind. You have a lot of mis-spellings and doubled letters. If you use the spell check option, they will help with that. Still, it does not take away from your accomplishment.

    Congratulations again on winning the Gold.


    Amythest


  • Luckintheshadows
    July 13

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    Well, for "off the top of your head" this is great. You address 2 of the biggest problems the world faces today in my humble opinion - a dire lack of communication, tolerance and understanding. Because, at the end of the day, it's not about who or what we worship, it's about our deeds and actions...
    Thank you for sharing this, and for taking the time to enter my contest.
  • emi
    July 9

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    Hey...while respect is a MUST among human beings of every race, culture or religion, I must point out that not all paths are right. Sincerity isn't enough. You have to choose the right way. To illustrate, once a friend of mine boarded a bus believing it was going where he wanted to go, but he was mistaken, and no amount of sincerity made the bus change its destination.
    Jesus Christ said: "I am THE way, THE truth and THE life, no man cometh unto the Father BUT BY ME." Not, A way among the many valid ways to God. Only ONE way. God has decreed it.