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His Masterpiece

His fingers dressed facades of counterfeit stones

in natural lines, textures pure and pristine,

though never leaving his signature

upon the gems of his marbleized artistry.

 

A painter content to add believable features

on the boulder clusters

enhancing the theme park's ambience and enchantment.

 

Midnight was his canvas' time of expression

happily laboring during hours when other sleep.

 

Was on his way to work early one morning

when caring eyes witnessed a semi truck

over turn on an exit, spilling gallons of diesel,

spraying the asphalt with showers of shattered glass.

 

Heart that saw all life as beauty

stopped and crawled through river of tractor juice

and cactus patch of windshield fragments

to rescue the driver,

trapped in his cab, seat belt release stuck.

 

Aiding by a Highway patrolmen,

with eyes stingy from the fumes,

scratches on body bleeding and painful,

finally his hands set free the trucker from his snare.

 

Leaving man in care of officer,

he went on to work

arriving still soaked in fuel,

face a shocking patchwork of cuts,

modestly acting as nothing special happened,

supervisor's stunned at his dedication

when he casually told of his experience,

sending him home to heal

overwhelmed at his love for others

expressed in acts and not boast

 

Soul of true angel's spirit,

who saw life as the most precious masterpiece

one could ever have.

Author notes

Prompt; From option 2.
Headline: Disneyland artist pulls man from wrecked big-rig

I think headline pretty much explains story.

Out of The Orange County Register, Local 4, Saturday, July 5, 2008 issue.

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Comments

  • very moving tribute to an everyday hero, elegant expression of such a dramatic situation. interesting choice of news article, well done.
  • Amazing imagery in this! You told this in a way that I felt I was right there.
    All the best. Wonderful!
    Gaylene;f

  • Speachless

    You use great imagery I can see this write clearly played out on the silver screen of grey matter I call a brain lol... I like how you painted the cop as the angel the outside chance and hope for the drivers survival,and how he gets cut and scraped the cop or the driver doesn't whine they go on to do there job.
    I like it

  • And as usual, awesome write. Such vivid imagery that just explodes off the page, with such unique word choice.