My body is aching,
The darkness over-taking,
I'm losing the battle,
That is felt,
Just in me.
Suicide in the making,
My life, I'm forsaking,
Trebling hands,
Wishing to,
Set myself free.
The face in the mirror,
Becomes so much clearer,
Because I now know,
That smile,
Is not me.
I realize that I'm slipping,
Seeing the knife that I am gripping,
That shock in my heart,
I know it far,
Too well.
Deafening chants I cannot let out,
What are they screaming about?
This pain just won't break,
I'm falling too fast,
How far is the ground?
Many struggles through the years,
It stopped escaping through my tears,
There's no escape left,
I'm nothing anymore,
It can't be my time.
Hold me up, higher,
Let me touch, the sky,
Let me, show myself,
I DON'T, want to die.
Let me break, myself free,
Tell me, I'm okay,
Help me, to live,
Even just, one more day,
Pray for, me now,
I am falling, to far,
I'm falling to fast,
Into the stars.
What's after this?
I know it's not time,
I just, can't leave,
All of you, behind.
I'm walking through hell,
How can, this be?
You gave me everything,
But I can't live happily.
The sadness over-takes,
I'm down on my knees,
Take the weight off my shoulders,
Please set me free.
Or tell them "stop!" up above,
They're calling, my name,
I hear them over, and over,
I can't stand, the refrain.
My body is aching,
The darkness over-taking,
I'm losing the battle,
That is felt,
Just in me.
Suicide in the making,
My life, I'm forsaking,
Trebling hands,
Wishing to,
Set myself free.
I'm
Fal l i n g
Into The
STARS.
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Hunni Please DON"T
Hunni I love you and I would give my life to give you peace in your life. I'm working on the kinks you no what they are please don't lose it... without you I might just die so let get through this together and make your life grand cuz without one of my babies I don't know what I would do!!!
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Mom
By the way I loove your poem it is a good one but tell the voices to Puck off and leave my baby alone!!!!!!!!!!
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oh mommy i wish u wouldn't read these!
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oh wow. this so great
this has so much emotion and power into it.
the emotion isnt just thrown out there, it is more like emotion trapped, but i really love this. great work
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thanks very much for the comment im glad u liked it.
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i know where you were com ing from when you wrote this poem. i too have suffered from depression for many years, and i am very happy to be alive right now. i have attempted suicide a number of times, and like you i have realized that life has so much worth living for. if u ever feel like doing something like this again, i am here if you want to talk to someone.
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thanks for the great comment and i know it is worth living... but why u know what i mean lol... live struggle die... yay! mite as well speed up the process a lil lol... i know that sounds dumb but i unno thanks very much for the support! i'm hoping this feeling goes away soon. again.
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