With light glowing from within,
You call out to me...
Singing to me, songs of hope and truth.
With an undying moonlight in your eyes,
You see right through me...
Past the costume, and the lies I tell myself.
With bits of blue skies in your smile,
You chase away the clouds...
That I have carefully collected, around my heart.
With a resonating sincerity in your voice,
You soothe my soul...
And I am found, wandering in your dreams.
With an embodied passion in your touch,
You rattle my core,
Awaking a princess, that has long been forgotten.
Author notes
OPTION 2: POETRY PROMPTS
1. bits of blue skies in your smile.
A contest entry
- PIF: options contest. by checkmate.
600 points, ended July 20, 10 entries
• next poem in this contest, remove from contest
Comments
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WOW! I am reading a new style so to speak did u bump your head ? j/k i love it keep up the great work!
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this is a beautiful piece. I love the emotions you wrote here- a great piece if work here. this is one of my favourite prompts and so thank you loads for writing this!
your style is refreshing. the emotions can be brought out a little more, I believe. but overall very impressive. lovely work.
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Simply wonderful. Wish only that this one could find a way to say so much with so few words. The emotional connection here is grand.
HUZZAH
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Just Beautiful!!!
Wow, there is so much love and tenderness to be found within this write... an amazing job you've done on your chosen prompt. Very best of luck dear!
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This made my jaw drop to me knees!
The title is my thoughts of the piece!
....with bits of blue sky in your smile....
that alone needs a frame around it.
...with an undying moonlight in your eyes,
...you see right through me.
...past the costume,
...and the lies
...I tell about myself.
You are all there,
hands stretched out
knowing the futile airs,
only endear you
to the boy with the undying
moonlight in his eyes.
I can not tell you how proud I am of you...and me...for having the knowledge of your work.
It's like climbing a ladder...
every piece gets me higher.
CHEERS GYPSY,
LIAM.
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Beautiful!!!
Simply beautiful.....the subject of this poem is a very lucky one indeed!!!
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Great write..
WOW, this is a beautiful poem! I love it!!
2 things I like best:
*"carefully collected" - great imagery...I could picture it right away! Bravo!!
(look Ma, no hands!!)
*not sure if it was a rule but I love how you incorporated the prompt into the poem...brillant!!
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