You are my straight "A" student
with grades right off the charts
you baffle me with wonder
with your head so full of smarts
You are my little peanut
my second to be born
if you should ever leave
my heart it would be torn
you always crack a joke
or pull a goofy prank
your sense of humor's funny
hits number one in rank
boys at school, they like you
they stare at you all day
but if someone asks to date you
mom she says, "No way!"
you're growing much too quickly
maturing everyday
growing to adulthood
heading on your way
you'll always be my sunshine
the apple of my eye
I'll love you until forever
even when I die
I'll be looking down from heaven
watching over you
blowing you my kisses
like I always do.
Author notes
Dedicated to my little "buddah"
A contest entry
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Comments
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lovely write ... just beautiful
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A wonderful show of love, by a wonderful mom, to her equally wonderful daughter. Sounds like you have a great relationship with each other.
Good Job Mom
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This is not only very sweet, but just shows us the lady here, who has a larger than life aurora, and beautiful wit, humour and attitude to those with a caring response. Lovely work,
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