They laugh at me and poke fun
Pretty soon it'll all be done
If only they knew the plans in my head
They would never have told me what they said
They would say they did not mean what they did
Never underestimate the quiet kid
They will say they're sorry, without a doubt
But it's too late now, their time has run out
I laugh and smile at their dismay
Oh, such a victorious day
They shout and scream, through their pain
I take my leave, as it starts to rain
Soon they'll realize that no one will hear their call
Except for me, just a shadow on the wall
Author notes
At the 4th of July party, I met this gut everyone called "Shadow". This is kind of the impression I got from him. Everyone was making fun of him, and I felt kin of bad for him. He seemed like the kind of person that could just snap in an instant.
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Thanx!
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Just pure genius
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did u talk to him?? I know what it feels like my friends always make fun of me. This is really awesome!!!!
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I like it I think we've all been there I know I have it's a very sad and lonely places
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wow!!!! this poem is amazing. i know exactly what it would be like for shadow at that party i get that all the time at university
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thats an awesome poem. 'shadow'. he sounds pretty cool. maybe one day he will snap. but maybe it is better that he didn't. he must have good self control. although i'm in with your poem. if anyone was teasing me i would do the same. good work.
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Wow! That was really good! You left out a space between through and their, but otherwise really good! You're rhyming was great!
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