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Sophie's Song

There are teardrops on my pillow
Each one has their own sad song
The teardrops on my pillow
Let me know I don't belong


I wander off on my own
I watch them from a distance
They don't realize I am gone
I know I'll never be missed

So I make the choice
I am to make it all end
But then I hear the voice
Of my one true friend

He turned my sadness into joy
I allowed myself to laugh once more
I owed my life to that one boy
But death came knocking at his door

There are teardrops on my pillow
One for each night you've been away
The teardrops on my pillow
Let me know that I can't stay...

Author notes

Don't ask why it is called "Sophie's Song" cuz I have no idea. I just like the name.

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Comments

  • aww this is fn amazing. i wrote a peom just like it. this is really great. i love everythin about it. u have some really great work!
  • Nice

    Nice...a little dark don't you think? It's really awesome though! Keep up the good work!!^_^
    I Love you LI-LI!!

    Much love,
    ~Kayla~


  • Strify
    July 5
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    This was very good!