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The Dragon and the Temptress.. . .

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Once there was a dragon
Who had eyes for a temptress...
She eventually stole his heart
And filled it with love
Beauty and the Dragon...


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Author notes

The title of this poem was inspired by Temptress..It was she I was thinking of when I wrote this!

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  • maralisa silver member
    July 6, 2008
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    wonderful poem with deep imagery good luck in the contest


  • CelticQueen
    July 5, 2008
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    But how?

    Can you tell me the story of how she stole his heart?

    cq


  • Sweet Impatience gold member
    July 5, 2008

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    I love this poem.. you did an excellent job.. I really love it a lot.

    good luck in the contest sweetheart

    kat


    • Dragonheart1 gold member
      July 6, 2008
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      The dragon and the temptress

      This is the first pome i wrote thinking of you..So you now have two..the other being if you were mine....


  • Patpowers silver member
    July 5, 2008
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    Nice job David!

    Liked the picture...liked the ballad. You did splendid! THANKS DAVID!


  • RawrSmileBabyPlz
    July 5, 2008
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    Great i liked this :]

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