i hate this never ending pain
this never ending curse
ever since i meet you my life has only got worse
i hate thinking of what you and me could have been
the never ending torment you brought with in
i hate thinking of you and what you did to me
i hate this heartake you inflected on me
i hate this life i need to be free
free from all the pain you caused me
i put a gun up to my head
so i can think of you no more
i will finaly be dead
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wow great poem good strong flow keep up the good work && keep writing good luck.
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WoW!!I lUv It!!DeRs SoO MuCh PaIn N eMoTiOn In It!!GrEaT fLoW 2!!....cHeCk OuT mY pOeMs 2!!
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this poem is really emotional it really good work i wish i could write poetry like that
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good poem. i can see that there is actually a lot of hate behind all thos words. more than i bet they there is. nice work. very emotional.
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A great poem with strong flow, just a small suggestion, run this through spell check and capitalize your 'i's.
In the 3rd line "meet" should be "met".
Excellent poem from the heart
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Such emotions are packed into these lines. Such frustration, hate, anguish... the poem was simply amazing. Good job on this, that's the way writers go. They pack their feelings into their work.
[Nicely done on the rhyming and flow too.]
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