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Forest of peace

Sitting on a log I feel at ease
The setting sun, the gentle wind, and the aroma of the pine
Looking up I see beams of light glimmering through the leaves
I close my eyes and dream of peace

A contest entry

can you feel at peace??

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  • misticmoonlite gold member
    July 12, 2008

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    now this is a great piece as I can see you sitting thinking and just being at peace within natures world..thank you for this entry, good luck
    Lin


  • Childsight
    July 5, 2008
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    nice write! very discriptive. good luck in the contest