Fire combined
To one girl
Who can controll
IT!!!
Waiting through the night
Ready and waiting
She burns
At the heart of the rose.
A contest entry
- BACKGROUND CONTEST! by Miss Chievous.
600 points, ended July 6, 2008, 8 entries
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Nice job!
Keep up the good work!
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welcome to allpoetry
Good job with this... I think you have found adequate words for the background. I especially like the ending lines. Thank you for sharing.
keep writing on.
~Kristy -
No applause, make it longer, more descriptive
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Maybe i want it short but you have your own opinion and I have mine. No offence. Thank for comment
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Great i liked this alot. Very good. :]
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This is Kewl!I like the red
Good luck!
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