i want to forget the call on june the 4h
that ended it all
my brother said
daddy is dead you can only imagine
the things in my head
i ran down the street and screamed at the top
of my lungs found a place to sit
and cried as if i felt i had died
you never know when things can happen
most of the time they are out of the blue
this is a part of life i want to forget
and the years i felt so blue
just now i am starting to come around the bend
never thought this pain would end
i want to smile like a child again
walk with a feeling of happiness inside
know that its great to be alive
we all have things the we want to forget
some simple some sad just know
there
is
nothing
like
losing
a mom
or
dad........
A contest entry
- Wanting to forget by City-of-Angels.
600 points, ended July 5, 2008, 15 entries
Bronze trophy winner
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i couldnt imagine life without my parents i am sorry you had to go through this #love always
erica carnea
xx
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I cannot even begin to imagine life without my dad. He's my everything and means the world to me. This is sooo sad!
Here is a hug to help catch your tears with. Great job sweetheart!
Warmest of love,
Mylee -
damn..hon i can't even imagine nor do I want to. I have a good friend that lost a father, after that she didn't seem the same..for a long time she was just..numb. I could just look in her eyes and see the hurt. This is a really good write thank you so much for entering and good luck.
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Family, love or hate 'em, they leave and indelible mark on us. We know a large part of the way we are is because of their love, their caring, their vision of what is right in this world. When they pass out of our lives there is a space that is never going to be filled. They are never forgotten, just passed on to the ones we love by the way we are in this universe. I understand. I lost both of mine to cancer. Too young and always too soon.
Love, Tom B.
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Tears do fall
Oh how ell I know this for my Dad opassed at age 48 and I did die a little as he left then my Mom passed two years ago and It seems a little more light from my world was taken away . Nothing can replace that light except for the memories we hold so dear . And how if we have open hearts we can see them through our own actions and visions within the mirror I do and I always say Hey there Mom or Dad I see you there and Im aware hold a place for me there in heaven for I shall get there one day
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