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High school musical

thgthtrhyt

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  • Noir mariposa...x gold member
    July 7, 2008

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    I like this, great use of the picture and colours ^^

    Might be a bit hard too read on the side though, but very good even if it is unfinished

    Claire x


  • Sharcu silver member
    July 7, 2008

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    Welcome to AllPoetry!

    Well, I'm not really seeing a poem here, though if you do post any poems and wish to see some feedback, I'd love to come back by and see your work! Thanks for sharing


  • RawrSmileBabyPlz
    July 5, 2008
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    good :] even tho its not finished