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vague recognition

forgotten
empty
photo
frames

lined a pond the wall

nonexistent
delusions

a vacant cold impression

fictional
memories

deleted or not real

rolls and rolls
of unused film
a vague recognition




A contest entry

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Comments

  • Melissa Gayle gold member
    July 9, 2008
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    I think some of the lines can be combined to aid your flow -

    aside some nice images there.


  • Sketchin
    July 8, 2008
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    I liked this one...very nice. good luck and thank you for entering.