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Shadow *edit

Bring your shadow over here
So it can dance across my face.

Bring your shadow over here
To comfort me in this place.

Don't leave me down and lonely.
Don't make me cry and beg.
Don't love me then leave me.

Bring your shadow over here
And lay it upon my soul.

Bring your shadow over here
To cover up the hole.

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  • Dalaney gold member
    July 7, 2008

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    quite a unique poem for the prompt Thank you so much for entering. Love, Lane


  • Ignis Corpus
    July 7, 2008

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    Wow, this is very good tot tot. I do like this piece. You have many amazing pieces though. Keep this up. I do like this stuff.
    -Tater Biscuit