Eyes of Jupiter
leak tears
Sweet sensations
cascading waves
in a rain of golden caresses
Heightening the senses
quickening intuition
moving you, in its rhythm
Lost
in a timeless dance
where the euphoria of love
is the ballerina
Twirling in hues,
wonders stimulating
endorphins
until passion peaks
Drowning you
in the bliss of abundance
awaiting the capture
of your heart, entranced
Within the happiness
of solar stars
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Eyes of Jupiter
Written June 20th, 2005
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The words give me images of swirls and curves of sensations.
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..first of all i love outer space..i adore the line (eyes of jupiter leak tears)..wonderful images evoked in the line (lost in a timeless dance
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i think of star signs here - quickening intuition - quicksilver thoughts like it would say of gemini, a good poem.
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beautiful
elegant in its simplicity. Not too wordy, but full of imagery. -
i like the idea of the ballerina twirling and the cascading of the ocean waves drowning... the ending is very captivating and it doesn't quite seem finalized
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i like the idea of the ballerina twirling and the cascading of the ocean waves drowning... the ending is very captivating and it doesn't quite seem finalized
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