Sitting by the lake...
Her beauty
Outshone the suns reflection.
She was dressed in a white flowing gown
and
With long tresses accentuating her figure
She looked like a princess...
but
Her heart was broken.
She was shedding tears...
That made the still lake ripple
and
Because tears were hiding her smile...
How i wished
I could comfort her with an embrace
of
Just kind words to help her laugh with joy.
If this were just a dream....
Could I be her Prince?
If so...
This is what I'd say...
Princess, why are you crying so?
Do you not see the beauty around you?
You can have anything you desire...
If you just wish for it...
yet,
You are dying within from tears...
and
Tears only bring more misery.
So
Stop crying and start living again.
If you were mine to hold,
I'd of never let you go.
He must of been a fool.
Let me into your heart...
For all I seek,
Is findng your soul again
And if I can do that
I will ask no more
Than just to remain your friend.
So
Make your choice...
To cry or laugh again!
The world needs your smiles
And I will give you the magic you need
If you just believe in me and living again!
dragonheart1
Author notes
I wrote this as a friend wanting to help someone love again...It may not be what you were looking for but all beauty comes from caring and helping others...not in just words but feelings too.
This poem is for Temptress...
A contest entry
- If you were mine (not me!) by Sin City Rockette.
525 points, ended July 10, 10 entries
Gold trophy winner
• next poem in this contest, remove from contest
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this is very beautiful poem that you have written for me.. I really love it. I'm sorry that I didn't leave a comment until now, but I was literally blown away with this, which rendered my speechless. very hard to leave a comment when unable to speak.
I am touched very deeply by your words, I really am.. though I'm used to crying all the time, and my soul is there, just sometimes it may seem hidden, but its there.. one just needs to look a bit more to find it.
you asked me to let you into my heart, how do you know that I have already done so..
"If you were mine to hold,
I'd of never let you go.
He must of been a fool."
these three lines mean more to me than you could ever possible know. perhaps he doesn't consider himself a fool, hard to lose someone that he never had, huh? I wish that I was yours too, but thats where the dreams lays..
not very good with dreams, not me anyway. but for you I will try, thats all I can do.. no promises.
good luck in the contest sweetheart
kat
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This was really sweet of you to write this for my twin.. I'm sure that she will love it.. You did a wondeful job.. I wish you the best of luck!!
Angel
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She was shedding tears...That made the still lake ripple Stop crying and start living again.If you were mine to hold,I'd of never let you go.He must of been a fool.
Let me into your heart...For all I seek,wonderful poem a smile travels many miles good luck in the contest
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The beauty of laugher
The beauty of laugher and the light shinning thur her hair make one life worth living but you have to be able to touch this beauty with the love of magic that will draw her to you like honey. to love and honor and always make her smile. that is the beauty of love in one heart. I like this very much. It is a soft and loving poem. just like when our warruir who play the flute with the softness of the music carrying it to the maiden ears.
Morningstar
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Kind magical words...
Such blessed thoughts poured into this verse. Enchanted poem this is...smile princess! Best of luck in the contest!
Az
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