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When We Separate

When that real hard time comes
And chances are we may have to separate
We will put in our best prayers
And leave the rest on our fate

Its going to hurt and make us break
This is much more than being sure
But with each moment that will pass
Time will do the best of cure

With our sweet memories within
We can feel that presence
So that with each moment
Our love will grow even in distance

When it hurts us so much more
Let our eternal love heal our pain
And then one final heavenly day
We shall meet once again

We shall meet once again
Never to be separated................

Author notes

well its actually sort of prayer or a promise that the 2 lovers make coz they know they are going to be separated.........

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  • Cerbie20
    August 22

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    this is good. i really liked it

    When it hurts us so much more
    Let our eternal love heal our pain
    And then one final heavenly day
    We shall meet once again

    this stanza was the best i think. its nice to have hope