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So few words

I have just thirty words to impress the host
to make her heart jump
and read it over and over,
with imagery, poetic devices,
a little humour and some skill

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30 words...good luck all

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  • Melissa Gayle gold member
    July 9, 2008
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    Very cute.


  • penman gold member
    July 7, 2008
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    Wonderful

    Great choice of 30 words. So very well expressed. Best of luck in the contest


  • Melodies
    July 5, 2008

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    Thirty words is even more difficult than haiku, for me, at least. You have done well with your three times ten!