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time alone will decide-----------------

The night is pitch dark
and nobody stands behind me
to fall back upon
in case of an emergency.

I am alone in the bedroom
taking rest after a restless day.
After half past midnight
some cries of a woman
are heard in horrible tone
and I am rather afraid of the event.

Has some body made a trick
with his artistic witch craft kick
or playing a mysterious game
against my bad luck on time

Author notes

PIF - Witching Hour

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  • Luckintheshadows
    July 7, 2008

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    Nice, I like the take on the prompt....your imagery is good too...I especially love the last line!

    Thanks for sharing this, and for taking the time to enter my contest,

    Luck.


  • AnanCat
    July 5, 2008
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    extraordinary poem!!! I liked the first few lines and the last one most.