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Romantic Dreams



She dreams of a lover, who'll sing of his love,
In a sonnet he's written for her,
That rivals the song of a lark up above
Or a cat's postprandial purr.

She wishes his charger was waiting outside,
That his armour was clanking within.
Then she dreams that two will go off for a ride
And the rest of her life can begin.

Or maybe a doctor, of lyrical bent,
Composing to her as he heals.
With every prescription an aubade is sent,
That tells of the way that he feels.

A fireman who ripples and laughs as she sighs
And rushes to do all he must.
Then home every evening to love in her eyes
And a promise of nights full of lust.

Her misty eyes filling with love for a man
Who'll take her and love her for life.
She truly loves Michael and knows of his plan
But really; an auditor's wife???


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  • well done.
    As always.
    You and cannonsfire made it worthwhile.
    This indeed was something.
    Love

    Passions

  • Very clever. Enjoyed this expression you have shared with me. Thank you much.
  • lol 'postprandial' an after dinner purr eh??? Well methinks you fed the lady too well then lol...this is outstanding as usual. Love, C

    • I wondered if the first note would explain postprandial or complain about it
      You can do aubade too of course?
      • dawn open air concert or would you prefer an evening serenade
        • I was going for Poem of lovers parting at dawn "Check Shakespeare or John Donne (And everyone else since!!!) or actually I wanted any romantic style of poetry in two syllables starting stressed
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