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Empty Home

 
 
No longer will I wake to that beautiful face
only to an empty pillow where your head
once layed beside mine.

The cereal your son loves so much
he will no longer be eating beside me
while watching his favorite cartoons.

There will be no-more happiness
echoing through the hallway
when you both hear me
come home from work.

No more family dinners or outings
only me left to deal with an aching heart
 only this time I have lost a son
aswell as my girlfriend.

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My girlfriend and her 3 yr old son are moving out. Thought I would be ok about it but i'm not.

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  • Wolf Mistress silver member
    July 6

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    Sometimes life gives things we don't see that way as long as we have them isn't it?
    But I guess as soon as they are gone than we realise they meand more to us than we wanted to admit....

    XXJeannette


  • queen Greeters member
    July 6
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    I can see it now it looked like an ancient alphabet with symbols and everything before very cool

  • PhantomsAngel87 Greeters member
    July 5
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    Lots of hugs


  • queen Greeters member
    July 5

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    I'm sorry I hope you find all the happiness life has to offer you deserve to be happy is this an alphabet?


    • Warrior7 Greeters member
      July 5
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      Is what an alphabet mate?

      • queen Greeters member
        July 5
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        how did you do that? the screen is full of symbols so i right clicked to paste it back to you and the words showed up
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