it was the first day of the world
no distractions in rebirth
breeze fell through the leaves
a new beginning for the earth
it had endured the many evils
seen the wrath of darkest mind
now softly growing forward
no more threat left from mankind
the creatures rejoiced
the world was new
A contest entry
- nature in the forest by misticmoonlite.
600 points, ended July 18, 2008, 12 entries
Silver trophy winner
• next poem in this contest, remove from contest
Comments
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Merry meet,
Congratulations on winning the Silver. This was a tough contest with lots of really good entries.
This was a wonderful poem about hope for mankind. Great work. I have no comments about the form or manner that wrote. Just wonderful and deserving of a trophy.
Once again, Congratulations on your Silver.
Amythest
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what a lovely take
this picture was actully taken a few weeks ago and you presented a poem with much serenity and calmness, thank you for this entry and good luck
Lin
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Very nice.
It reminds me of the first day of Spring.
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applaud's
and oncore......that was beautiful
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