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Smile

I’m crying out…
To friends and family…
Strangers…
And divinity…
We’re all lost…
In this world…
Of danger…
And deceit…
All we know…
Is pain…
And defeat…
We’ve got…
To wake up…
And we’ve got…
To smile…
We’ve got…
To live…
Without…
Denial…
We are all one…
One cry…
Of pain…
One love…
One hate…
One purpose…
In vain…

We can’t…
Go on…
Living…
Like this…
Living from…
Each slap to…
Each…
Kiss…
We’ve got…
Our morals…
At least…
At times…
We’ve got…
Our reasons…
We’ve got…
Our rhymes…
There is no…
Turning back…
This time…

Author notes

sounds better when sung to the music that it goes with

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  • St. Poet
    July 15, 2008
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    Very good, I like it, and i believe it would make a great song.