Live for me and make me yours
Send your magic through my core
Close my eyes, unlock my heart
Make my spirit's engine start
Tie my hands and give me wings
Show me what this freedom means
Let's take the world without a care
I'll let you lead me anywhere.
Author notes
Random poetry riding a bus around Europe. Hope you like!
COMMENT!!!!!!!!
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this is really great. You did an awesome job. Scoring: Creativity-10/10, emotion-18/20, structure-10/10, wording-15/15 overall acore: 53! You're moving! I'll cintact you later on to let you know what's next
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Short, sweet, and to the point. I love it, sis. This is really incredible. It kind of sounds like a love poem, a really good one, I might add. I really enjoyed this one sis. Love you!
♥Chelsea
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Thank you sis, as always.
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Oh, this one IS a great pairing to "Story". I had to go back and read it after reading your author note! Brilliant.
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