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good morning, beautiful

"good morning, beautiful"
i smile at you, my new bride
with tender kisses, you respond


gentle hands caressing, touching
bring our senses fully alive
as sleep gives way to passion

 

 

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~ for my beloved

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  • Dalaney gold member
    July 6, 2008

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    Good morning, beautiful....three very lovely words to hear...say them to her always. love, lane


  • SummerlandRayne gold member
    July 5, 2008

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    How precious these times will linger in your memories throughout the years. Blessed be my friends!!!

    'sssssssssss
    Sue


  • Chrysalis
    July 5, 2008

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    sleeping with and awaking with someone so beautiful. I love those beautiful thoughts.

    blessed be much luck in the contest.
    Blanche