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Lonely Thoughts

There I sweat in grime and dirt
Tired, for I have walked miles
Across the rain covered forest.
Here is shelter at last in color
Within these shadows I will rest.
Let not my heart yearn for meadow's
For love has flown and I walk alone.


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  • misticmoonlite gold member
    July 12, 2008

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    this poem is so lonely but yet I see peace within your walk as the comfort of a rest is longing to be had.nice addition in this contest, thank you and good luck
    Lin


  • sekmhet eye of ra
    July 12, 2008
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    it's just so pretty; it made me smile. don't change this...ever!