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The words I find...

 

 

 

Single drop,
falls upon your cheek
showing the glisten of
sweet joy shared in this tear,
the diamond moments.

I move closer to the beating in your chest
longing to be the leaf that never falls,
curled around the branches as you sleep.

There’s no reason to let go
your arms are my home;
the nestle of simplicity
when we lock it all outside
to have the safety of ourselves.

When the air gets thick
with cool winds and ice breaks
through the spell of summer,
magic will be self contained
inside our hearts,
beating for each other.

A falling star, ours to wish upon
see it flare in the shadow of our kiss
everyone is envious to see love like this.

Hold me, I‘ll embrace your warmth
as storms share battlegrounds
just outside our window
Still, all I feel is you,
and all
your heart shares with mine.

 

 

 

 

Author notes

It was such a joy to work on this with my southern cousin Cannonsfire..we both take such pleasure in speaking from our hearts..and hope this touches each reader

Pic is from photobucket...

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  • sailor ptolema
    July 6, 2008

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    awww! I LOVE LOVE LOVE how this turned out!! Sorry I couldn't help you with it the other day But, I highly doubt I could have been this genuine and graceful. You both did wonderfully, made me feel all smiley
    BRAVO!!!~~~~~

    S.P.


    • MaMa-2-be-Cindy
      July 6, 2008
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      it's okay...to have worked with C, in the end..was awesome..well as you can see, to what we produced hehehe..glad it made you smmile, so it should

  • HiddenByTheDark
    July 6, 2008

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    I love the background the picture but most of all the poem. I'm glad that you took this from your heart. I feel everyone show have at least two poems about love. Love gained and love lost. Those two topics are the base of everything.

    ♥always Kate

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    • MaMa-2-be-Cindy
      July 6, 2008
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      thats very true..we can heal through our poems..we can love through them too

  • x-Black-Butterfly-x silver member
    July 5, 2008

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    wow this is such a beautiful write and the words describe a sweet and breath taking love. an amazing piece here sis

  • storiesuntold
    July 5, 2008
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    OOPS

    I commented on this one already but will leave a comment so you wont lose points .

  • MJ Donnelly gold member
    July 5, 2008
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    Aw, this is sweet! Well done you two!


    Love and peace always,
    mj.


  • storiesuntold
    July 5, 2008

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    Lovely work

    Oh the pleasures of life so laced with a golden halo of love where heaven does shne when love is known from within the heart

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  • Once Upon A Mind
    July 5, 2008

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    Great Collaboration! All about love, you KNOW I'm lovin' it!! Congrats and very well done to both of you

    "through the spell of summer,
    magic will be self contained
    inside our hearts,"

    Ahhhh Love!

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    • MaMa-2-be-Cindy
      July 5, 2008
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      Hello my darling Amber

      and well why wouldnt you love something all bout love...

      I'd be worried if ya didn't hehehe

      Cannonsfire wrote that..and I was like wow, perfect magic contained inside our hearts...she knows the perfect words..like me..to describe the best thing on earth, LOVE

      Thanks for stopping in darl


      Cind

  • Rovingone gold member
    July 5, 2008

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    What I move closer to the beating in your chest
    longing to be the leaf that never falls,
    curled around the branches as you sleep.

    There’s no reason to let go
    your arms are my home;
    the nestle of simplicity
    when we lock it all outside
    to have the safety of ourselves.
    passion!

    This is truly a love poem!

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    • MaMa-2-be-Cindy
      July 5, 2008
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      ..for yout o say it is truly a love poem..really makes my day hehe, wow what a lovely comment to read..thank you

  • Margaret Denham gold member
    July 5, 2008

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    You're writing the most amazing sensual poetry lately Babygirl and this collaboration is just one more to add to the list.

    Soft elegant flow and so many heartfelt thoughts.

    Congratulations to both of you.

    Love always
    Mum


  • Wandering Woodchuck silver member
    July 5, 2008

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    Very Tender.

    This is such a sweet and tender poem. The collaboration is very well done. Many times when I read a collaboration the styles are so shockingly different that they ruin the poem. This one flowed well and the styles didn't clash.

    . Rewarded 4


    • MaMa-2-be-Cindy
      July 5, 2008
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      I could never post a collab that doesnt have the natural flow of becoming one..from the two writers etc...

      So thank you for your thoughts, much appreciated

    • Cannonsfire gold member
      July 5, 2008
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      The lines are actually interlaced throughout this piece so it is harder to define a different style rather than an answer and response. C

  • ChildOfRhiannon gold member
    July 5, 2008

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    So beautiful!!! This is just a wonderfully touching verse...you two write so well together. How precious this is!!!

    Blrssed Be~
    Aunty Az

    . Rewarded 4


  • LadyDementia gold member
    July 5, 2008

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    Oh wow, this is stunning! You have done a fantastic job, both of you. Really tugs the heart strings and reminds you what love is all about. Superb imagery, love this poem!
    Love the Background to


    • MaMa-2-be-Cindy
      July 5, 2008
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      heheh wooops forgot to credit u, sorry lol..

      oh i could only hope it does pull at the heart strings, so good to hear

  • cricketjeff gold member
    July 5, 2008

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    Tender and loving collaboration. That poetry allows us to play with these ideas and talk this way with friends is great fun. Thoroughly enjoyed this.

    . Rewarded 4


  • Jet City Woman
    July 5, 2008
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    Aww this is beautiful! I wish I could meet someone like that!!!


  • Cannonsfire gold member
    July 5, 2008
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    Cin, this says so much about you and Matt that you can write this way too. I loved helping you on this and sigh...understand how loves goes Thanks Cuz for the honor of giving it to you and yours. Love, C


    • MaMa-2-be-Cindy
      July 5, 2008
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      ..he got a little misty eyed when I read it to him..so we both touched his heart..

      And thnak you to Cuz...A joy..I see us working together again in the future hehe



      Cind

  • notorious
    July 5, 2008

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    "the diamond moments"
    Oh...wonderful phrase...it's just so SHINY.

    "spell of summer"
    Simple but just..poetic.

    Teehee, I'm the first to comment. (:


    • MaMa-2-be-Cindy
      July 5, 2008
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      sorry if it was hard to read..i just changed the background lol

      hehe you are first..and I love it..love always to hear your thoughts



      Cind
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