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Gone, gone away
His wondering eyes
Beside another
He now lies

If only in spirt
He holds her hand
If only in their dreams
He's her man

Only on this night
Are they alone
Only in his mind
His heart she owns

His eyes open wide
To see me by his side
His eyes reveal to me
the disappiontment he can't hide

I hold on tight
Only to let go
Hiding the pain
I won't show

A soft goodbye
A lovers song
A wish for your love
That won't last long

Staying close
Keeping faith
Never forgetting
We've time to waste

Winning back
What I've lost
Your strong trust
I know the cost

Fixing now
Back to right
I've won my love.
I've won my fight.

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  • Welcome to AllPoetry!

    Hmm, there is a couple of ways I can take the ending to this. It shows the feelings you hold inside. I hope I have read it correctly and it means that you actually HAVE this person by your side now. Wishing you the best.

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    • Welcome to AllPoetry

      Well I hope to have him by my side soon.
      Kind of a view into the future.