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Five Lines

Papers filled with empty, meaningless scribbles sit in front of the teen.
She’s waited so long for a chance, through music, to say
All that her heart has kept unsung, unspoken, unseen.
A music staff: five lines define what notes to play
But only she decides what those notes will mean.

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  • Velvet Rose Petals
    July 6, 2008

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    omg so i have a picture of my piano and then i added a saying with it saying "find the key to my heart and I'm yours." it reminded me of that. i love this, so sweet and simple.
    perfect.


    • after-silence
      July 6, 2008
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      Wow I love that! What a nice play on words. Thanks for the read and the comment; I'm really glad you liked it!


  • CelticQueen
    July 5, 2008

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    Is she writing poetry or composing a song? Either way,
    she WILL make it hers, won't she?

    Thanks for entering the contest.

    cq

    • after-silence
      July 5, 2008
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      It was supposed to be about creating music; I tried to fix the wording a little to see if I could make that more clear. Don't know if it helped.
      Thanks for hosting the contest! It's definitely harder for me to stick to writing short poetry haha. I'm glad I tried it out though.