How much did you love me?
Let me count the ways.
Did you ever love me?
The look in your eye betrays.
You never brought me flowers,
You never gave me a real ring.
Where was the romance?
We were just imagining.
A contest entry
- Wanting to forget by City-of-Angels.
600 points, ended July 5, 2008, 15 entries
• next poem in this contest, remove from contest - Pre-write-a-pal-ooza by Nicole Hanna.
300 points, ended July 8, 2008, 25 entries
• next poem in this contest, remove from contest
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Good beginning
Welcome to ap. A good place to begin. Many cool people out here. I see you've met some. Good little write you have here. Sorry 'bout the romance thing. Not all guys have it. Should have married a poet. Now there's a romantic imagination for yah. Have fun writing!
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Thank you for the welcome! Well, my ex was romantic at first, but after the war?
xoxo
KJ
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I agree with the comment below....VERY strong end lines, great job! Good luck in the contest!
jamie
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Thank you! Well, sad to say, it's all true. He wasn't a romantic man.
xoxo
KJ
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Short and powerful just how i like em
"Where was the romance?
We were just imagining."
Great ending here, I can really relate. I liked all the questioning in there also
Well done and Good luck! -
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I'm still new at this, thank you very much!
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