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He, His, Painful will

As it was an unholy tome,
A chapter in his life,
With tore spirits and wastes,
To watch the slow moving knife.

He will give a star,
To the core of fire,
That bold and bright,
Night giving light,
And the world will die again.

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  • aanika
    July 5, 2008

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    i was kind of looking for something longer.
    however, the last line-
    Night giving light,
    And the world will die again.
    -is really powerful.
    i enjoyed it.