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Invitation for Something You Do Not Expect

 

 

 

 

 

 

 

Come into our chamber
we want to love you to pieces
like the man before you
lying in his own black blood.

We are here for your pleasure
and then ours.
Of course our desire
has to do with consummation
of the flesh.

We use your lust against you.
Do you see the pale glow of my skin
the seduction in my eyes.
The invitation of our smile?

We promise the last night
if pleasure you will never have.

 

 

 

 

 

 

 

 

 

 

 

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  • Tattboyspet silver member
    July 7

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    last line should be of instead of if

    The sentiment behind this write was a little different (cannabalism and all that) and the fact that it was set by 'ladies of the night', but I'm not sure whether you actually got the complete darkness that could've been captured with this image.
    Having said that, I would like to thank you for thinking outside the box and coming up with something other than the norm for this picture and thank you for your entry

  • Woodchuck4400 silver member
    July 5

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    Chilling, wonderful, and horrific. All I could think of when I saw the prompt was that it was a picture of young serial killers. Best of luck in the contest.


  • azlyn gold member
    July 5
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    Very chilling! Darkly wonderful!


    Az


  • fortyninereasons silver member
    July 5

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    This is very dark, reminds me of the black widow spider... has her wicked way then eats her partner! Juls


  • Cannonsfire silver member
    July 5

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    Brrr this makes a chill invade the body and a shiver. Nice dark write here. C

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