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[ Here i am ]

Here i am
an invisible warrior
fighting for you
even tho you do not know you are in war

a warrior
with broken shield and a dull sword
armor that's rusted and falling apart
a fair share of scratches and dents
slowly falling away

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will finish later.

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  • BeyondTheSurface
    July 6, 2008
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    So far I like... but I think you need to finish it...

    Cassie