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Fire

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heat out of control
fire rages wickedly
tremors of thy heart

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ScarletO

17 syllables from syllable counter

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  • Harrisham Minhas
    July 7, 2008

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    Thank you for your Haiku:

    heat out of control
    fire rages wickedly
    tremors of thy heart

    Wonderful expression of the fire and its relation to a person.

    Thanks again.

    Harrisham Minhas

  • Liquid memories
    July 6, 2008

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    a heated write filled with many possibilities of emotional release. think all of us have experienced that at least once in our lives. thanks for sharing your firey thoughts.


  • Ethereal One gold member
    July 5, 2008
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    Excellent expression of emotion. Good luck in the contest!

    Jeannette